I’ve been absent for a while again, life has been very hectic but I’m having a go at this weeks Flash Fiction. Many thanks as always to our wonderful hostess Rochelle Wisoff-Fields who runs Friday Fictioneers.
The Midnight Hour
By Heidi Busby Brown
The Grandfather clock strikes twelve. Its loud chime vibrating the crystals on the old wooden chandelier.
Jane glides up the ancient staircase and I follow her onto the gallery landing.
The stench of cigar smoke fills the air.
He’s here.
Rough hands close around her throat, lifting her upwards. She claws at him as he holds her over the edge.
I can’t help her.
He releases her, his blank eyes stare at me as Jane plummets to the ground below.
My scream is silenced.
I take my last breath as the twelfth chime rings out.
It’s over.
At least until tomorrow night, when the clock strikes twelve.
Thank you ever so much for taking the time to read, I would love to hear from you so please feel free to leave me a comment. If you would like to read more from the Friday Fictioneers then click on the blue frog, you won’t regret it!
Dear Heidi,
Midnight, the witching hour. Spooky.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you i’m glad you liked it. I’ve really missed joining in and getting to read everyones work. 🙂
hugs,
Heidi
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So I’m guessing the narrator is a ghost too? Very sinister.
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Spot on Sandra, it’s me having a go at writing a ghost story 🙂
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* Shivers *
She’s revisiting the way she died, every night at the witching hour?
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She most certainly is. Thank you for reading 🙂
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It’s a ghost night out. 🙂 They’ll enjoy and there will be no cleaning to do. Nice story, Heidi.
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Thank you Norma, glad you enjoyed it. Much better to not leave a mess lol 🙂
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I wonder if there will be more than one ghost tomorrow..
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I believe there will be. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Does he appear every night? If so, there’ll be a shortage of virgins soon.
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Yes he does patrick, not so sure about them being virgins though lol 😀
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I enjoyed this night out with the ghosts, Heidi. I hope that house is unoccupied. Good description and well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you so much Suzanne I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Love a good ghost tale, well done!
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Thank you Yolanda I’m really glad you liked it 😃
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It’s like Friday the Thirteenth meets Groundhog Day. Clever idea: well done.
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Thank you ever so much, I’m really glad you like it ☺
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I want to visit this house 👻 brilliant story! Will she be strong enough one day to intervene, I wonder? 😃
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Thank you hun. I would like to think she’s building herself up to break it 😆
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I’m staying well clear! Nice one.
Visit Keith’s Ramblings!
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Thank you Keith ! I will do 🙂
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Great ghost story!
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Thank you 🙂
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Kind of like a ghoulish Groundhog Day? Neat! I had a haunting theme to my submission, too. WOn’t come out til Friday, though…
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I love ghost stories! Did you know/believe ghosts are real? 🙂
Lily
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I love ghost stories too ! Thank you for taking the time to read. 🙂
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Nice take to the prompt
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Thank you DeeDee 🙂
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An eerie tale indeed, well done.
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Thank you very much, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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This is a great and spooky ghost story. So sad that these ghosts can’t find peace.
I see a story brewing where someone moves in and helps them get their revenge. 🙂
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This is ghost is a little more sinister than Casper.
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So the ghostly victim is actually the one who is haunted. What a clever twist. Very good. Very atmospheric.
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Oooh, excellent take on a classic ghost story. 🙂
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Oooo-ooohhhh!
AnElephant is glad he is pink or he would be white as a sheet.
He is under the bed now!
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Ooh, that’s a pretty grisly midnight scene, and not something to look forward to. Well done.
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