Hello all!
I hope you are well and ready for some more Flash Fiction. As always, we are given our photo prompt by our wonderful Friday Fictioneer leader, Rochelle . I had few ideas for this prompt, but ended up writing something completely different. So here is my attempt for this week. I hope you enjoy it.
Clean Up
Under the light of the moon, I tug the last black bin bag out of the car boot and stumble across to the dumpster at the end of the row.
Lifting the lid up I can’t help but gag as the stench of rotting waste fills my nostrils. Holding my breath, I roll the bag over the edge and let it drop.
With shaking hands, I lower the lid and release my breath.
Half way to the car my phone vibrates in my pocket. Removing my gloves, I swipe the screen to answer as I climb into the front seat.
“Is he gone Lacey?” She whispers, I can hear the rhythmic beeps of the hospital equipment in her room.
“Yes.” I glance in the mirror at the blue and purple bruises forming on my neck.
“He won’t be coming back this time, I promise.”
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my offering this week! If you would like to read more flash fiction from the Friday fictioneers please click on the blue frog below, you won’t be disappointed!
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Dear Heidi,
Your story gives me chills. I hope they never trace Lacey to the murder. Sounds like this bastard needed killing. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Thank you so much! He deserved it, lol.
Hugs,
Heidi 🙂
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Brutal. I like it.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Whoa. I guess she’s really, really sure he won’t be back this time. Good story with a great twist at the end, Heidi. This stands well alone and could also be a great hook for a longer story. Well done. —– Suzanne
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Thank you so much Suzanne! You’ve got me thinking now about what it could it turn into lol 🙂
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Oooh! Great last line. Glad he’s gone 😁
Brilliant use of words within such a tight limit. Loved this one, well done!
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Thank you cheryl! It’s one of those days where a bit of revenge just felt right lol 🙂
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You can’t beat a bit of revenge on a Wednesday afternoon 😀
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Good for her!
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Everyone needs a friend like Lacey. Well, maybe not everyone but… Good one, I like a touch of pay-back.
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Where’s a friend like Lacey when you need one 🙂 Nicely done.
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Thank you 🙂
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Good for her ! She took care of the “problem” for her friend. A really great story! 👏
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Thank you ever so much! 🙂
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Well that’s sorted that. Sounded like it needed doing and she put the trash out well and truly. Great read.
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Thank you!😀
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Sometimes you just have to implement drastic solutions to take care of a recurrent problem…
One should not mess with Lacey!
Well done. I enjoyed that.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and I’m very glad you enjoyed it! I would’nt mess with Lacey lol 🙂
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Very dark. Nice!
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Thank you hun! Bit different from last weeks lol 🙂
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What a great story, intensity pouring out of every sentence.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Great story, yes sounds like he richly deserved a dumpster fate, great use of the inspiration, really liked how it came together.
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Such a protective friend. That man won’t hurt anyone any more.
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Yeah, what are friends for? Nicely done.
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Great story. It sounds like he got what he deserved.
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A clinical and systematic release from harm. If only all bullies understood the underlying hopes of their victims, they (the bully) may fear retribution. What a wonderful idea in theory!!!
I was pleased to read your bully received his just deserts. 😉
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Here’s a story! Beautifully crafted in so few words. I think justice has been served.
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Had he aged a while before she dumped him, or was it just bad cologne?
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Great pacing and building tension. Nicely done!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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You are most welcome.
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